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[d-i doc] 翻訳更新



杉山です。

Debian GNU/Linux インストールガイドの原文の以下の更新に
対する作業をしました。

en/partitioning/partition/hppa.xml : 28997 -> 35595
en/partitioning/partition/mips.xml : 28672 -> 35613
en/partitioning/partition/i386.xml : 31618 -> 35590

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ちなみに,各ファイルの英文における差分は以下のようになります。

% svn diff en/partitioning/partition/hppa.xml -r28997:35595
Index: en/partitioning/partition/hppa.xml
===================================================================
--- en/partitioning/partition/hppa.xml  (.../installer/doc/manual/en/partitioning/partition/hppa.xml)   (リビジョン 28997)
+++ en/partitioning/partition/hppa.xml  (.../manual/en/partitioning/partition/hppa.xml) (リビジョン 35595)
@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@
 ext2 partition near the start of the disk and mount that on
 <filename>/boot</filename>, since that is the directory where the Linux
 kernel(s) will be stored.  <filename>/boot</filename> needs to be big enough
-to hold whatever kernels you might wish load; 8&ndash;16MB is generally
-sufficient.
+to hold whatever kernels (and backups) you might wish to load; 25&ndash;50MB
+is generally sufficient.
 
 </para>
   </sect2>

% svn diff en/partitioning/partition/mips.xml -r28672:35613
Index: en/partitioning/partition/mips.xml
===================================================================
--- en/partitioning/partition/mips.xml  (.../installer/doc/manual/en/partitioning/partition/mips.xml)   (リビジョン 28672)
+++ en/partitioning/partition/mips.xml  (.../manual/en/partitioning/partition/mips.xml) (リビジョン 35613)
@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@
   <sect2 arch="mips"><title>Partitioning for &arch-title;</title>
 <para>
 
-SGI Indys require an SGI disk label in order to make the system bootable
+SGI machines require an SGI disk label in order to make the system bootable
 from hard disk. It can be created in the fdisk expert menu. The thereby
-created volume header(partition number 9) should be at least 3MB large.
+created volume header (partition number 9) should be at least 3MB large.
 If the volume header created is too small, you can simply delete
 partition number 9 and re-add it with a different size. Note that the
 volume header must start at sector 0.

% svn diff en/partitioning/partition/i386.xml -r31618:35590
Index: en/partitioning/partition/i386.xml
===================================================================
--- en/partitioning/partition/i386.xml  (リビジョン 31618)
+++ en/partitioning/partition/i386.xml  (リビジョン 35590)
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
 
 </para><para>
 
-The recommended way of accomplishing this is to create a small (5&ndash;10MB
+The recommended way of accomplishing this is to create a small (25&ndash;50MB
 should suffice) partition at the beginning of the disk to be used as
 the boot partition, and then create whatever other partitions you wish
 to have, in the remaining area.  This boot partition

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