[debian-doc 00158] Re: bullseyeリリースノートの原文7/4以降追加分を翻訳してみました

SUGIMOTO Norimitsu dictoss @ live.jp
2021年 8月 1日 (日) 21:08:36 JST


杉本です。

マージリクエストを出して、マージいただきました。
https://salsa.debian.org/ddp-team/release-notes/-/merge_requests/115
https://salsa.debian.org/ddp-team/release-notes/-/merge_requests/114

やまねさん> ありがとうございました。

よろしくお願いいたします。


On Sat, 31 Jul 2021 16:09:38 +0900
SUGIMOTO Norimitsu <dictoss @ live.jp> wrote:

> 杉本です。
> 
> rdiff-backup と slapd の翻訳はもう少し見直した方がよいのではないか、と
> お話をいただきました。
> 
> それで再考してみまして、作業リポジトリに修正案をpushしました。
> 
> https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsalsa.debian.org%2Ftokyodebian-team%2Frelease-notes%2F-%2Fcommit%2F4041e338f23234596048d209558a5c59e9dda3d1&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902588114%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=YIXGfVaOTPWLtFCQfbzDoD0nBWr1tnurMAwDHhXtz2g%3D&reserved=0
> 
> [翻訳を修正した日本語ページ]
> ・rdiff-backupの部分
> https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftokyodebian-team.pages.debian.net%2Frelease-notes%2Freleases%2Ftesting%2Famd64%2Frelease-notes%2Fch-information.ja.html%23rdiff-backup&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902588114%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=EYNt2ueuDAT9NaaDjhCksCGxW%2FpPdKfHyqJasqdr%2Fno%3D&reserved=0
> 
> ・slapdの部分
> https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftokyodebian-team.pages.debian.net%2Frelease-notes%2Freleases%2Ftesting%2Famd64%2Frelease-notes%2Fch-information.ja.html%23deprecated-components&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902588114%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=47qq0t4mQBTaDxE4JX1lZlL2Vrp1NF7pelRnLKP2AKQ%3D&reserved=0
> 
> ここが変、というところがあればご指摘いただければありがたいです。
> 
> よろしくお願いいたします。
> 
> On Thu, 29 Jul 2021 22:14:18 +0900
> Yosuke Otsuki <y.otsuki30 @ gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> > 杉本さん
> > 
> > ありがとうございました。
> > 
> > On Thu, Jul 29, 2021 at 9:40 PM SUGIMOTO Norimitsu <dictoss @ live.jp> wrote:
> > 
> > > おおつきさん、皆様
> > >
> > > 杉本です。
> > >
> > > さきほど、salsa.debian.orgの本家リリースノートリポジトリへ
> > > 追加の翻訳分のマージリクエストを出しました。
> > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsalsa.debian.org%2Fddp-team%2Frelease-notes%2F-%2Fmerge_requests%2F113&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902588114%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=1xVY9KACQozCMKdAIfGY%2B3oRml7ISl61qPaM7FEuoRU%3D&reserved=0
> > >
> > > それでは。
> > >
> > > On Sun, 25 Jul 2021 17:14:14 +0900
> > > Yosuke Otsuki <y.otsuki30 @ gmail.com> wrote:
> > >
> > > > 皆さま
> > > >
> > > > 原文に追加があったので、以下の翻訳を追加しました。
> > > >
> > > > 5.3.2 非推奨になったコンポーネント (一番下、slapd の部分のみ)
> > > > ・
> > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftokyodebian-team.pages.debian.net%2Frelease-notes%2Freleases%2Ftesting%2Famd64%2Frelease-notes%2Fch-information.ja.html%23deprecated-components&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902588114%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=47qq0t4mQBTaDxE4JX1lZlL2Vrp1NF7pelRnLKP2AKQ%3D&reserved=0
> > > >
> > > > コミット
> > > > ・
> > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsalsa.debian.org%2Ftokyodebian-team%2Frelease-notes%2F-%2Fcommit%2F653debfa69416208e265ffca44d9300b3498e332&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=NCl3PWQnoapabafYUUrkFDQUd7KyUD94HNtCTs4cCx4%3D&reserved=0
> > > >
> > > > On Sun, Jul 18, 2021 at 10:07 PM SUGIMOTO Norimitsu <dictoss @ live.jp>
> > > wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > みなさま
> > > > >
> > > > > 杉本です。
> > > > >
> > > > > おおつきさんにも手伝っていただいて7/4以降で原文が
> > > > > 追加・変更された分を翻訳してみました。
> > > > > 現状、https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsalsa.debian.org%2Fddp-team%2Frelease-notes&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=4%2BTMfCcnt66fwR4GU90FoX3iP%2BTFRaAKJ0PCl3m6fNs%3D&reserved=0> > > > > まだマージ依頼していないプレビューの翻訳となります。
> > > > >
> > > > > [追加翻訳してビルドしなおした仮ページ]
> > > > > ・3.2. クラウドへのインストール
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftokyodebian-team.pages.debian.net%2Frelease-notes%2Freleases%2Ftesting%2Famd64%2Frelease-notes%2Fch-installing.ja.html%23cloud&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=LpIZMSsEox806UKPYyMEGLXaacLoUjHr3zN%2BWJNpPoM%3D&reserved=0
> > > > >
> > > > > ・5.1.18. rdiff-backup が サーバーとクラアントを同時にアップグレードする必要があります。
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftokyodebian-team.pages.debian.net%2Frelease-notes%2Freleases%2Ftesting%2Famd64%2Frelease-notes%2Fch-information.ja.html%23rdiff-backup&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=hBdrVrsE7I%2Bgz76ueNFji8fmSxcXOSuPrIudZYFFgfc%3D&reserved=0
> > > > >
> > > > > ・5.2.1.1. ウェブブラウザとレンダリングエンジンにおけるセキュリティ更新の状態
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftokyodebian-team.pages.debian.net%2Frelease-notes%2Freleases%2Ftesting%2Famd64%2Frelease-notes%2Fch-information.ja.html%23limited-security-support&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=kFLMLqqc1I8R2ysvwG07lerHFSQfehcb2u%2Fn%2F0HdOWQ%3D&reserved=0
> > > > >
> > > > > ・5.2.1.1.  脚注
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftokyodebian-team.pages.debian.net%2Frelease-notes%2Freleases%2Ftesting%2Famd64%2Frelease-notes%2Fch-information.ja.html%23idm1473&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=vH9TWRb%2FsTeoPFMHJkX5r%2FzWfD%2BdZ%2BNFyZjaAW0Yzms%3D&reserved=0
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > [コミット]
> > > > > ・3章
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsalsa.debian.org%2Ftokyodebian-team%2Frelease-notes%2F-%2Fcommit%2Fd7161fa50a3841873ff49aa146cd799a014c98e8&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=YMvAVJlewOCkx0POo10eh7IG15jRi7hHsGphyStM%2Bv0%3D&reserved=0
> > > > >
> > > > > ・5章
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsalsa.debian.org%2Ftokyodebian-team%2Frelease-notes%2F-%2Fcommit%2F7318f3d7ef27327832f9903a90fc1c07d8c74cd2&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=iTvuGRezTvP0CWJf2of4rXfQku91OIQlg3PuR%2BBWs1M%3D&reserved=0
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > [原文の追加、変更個所]
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsalsa.debian.org%2Fddp-team%2Frelease-notes%2F-%2Fcommits%2Fmaster%2Fen%2Finstalling.dbk&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=WFMZsG86oiSonW%2Bicm4p2XZ3Xo7P2lBSkXJGIOvpx3s%3D&reserved=0
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > https://apac01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fsalsa.debian.org%2Fddp-team%2Frelease-notes%2F-%2Fcommits%2Fmaster%2Fen%2Fissues.dbk&data=04%7C01%7C%7C85317c28569744d5efe208d953f22f3f%7C84df9e7fe9f640afb435aaaaaaaaaaaa%7C1%7C0%7C637633121902598073%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C1000&sdata=Wnyutruy%2Fuofr75mgzPtoISGu5YEVFRX3IonnA5h7VE%3D&reserved=0
> > > > >
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