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Re: [Debian Weekly News Draft2] Debian JP News 1999/9/13 - 1999/9/19



中野です。 すみません、遅くなりました。

# 研究室で寝ちまいました(^^;

<19990921001704N.shishamo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>の記事において
shishamo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxさんは書きました。

> Debian JP Weekly の Draft2 です。
> 
> http://www.3web.ne.jp/~shishamo/debian/trans/djwn/wn091999.html
> 
> に HTML 版は置いています。
> 
> 明日朝7 時ごろに Joey Hess に送信しますので、それまでにご要望なりなん
> なり私のほうまでお願いします。

 最近はほとんど些細なことばかりになっていますが、気付いた点です。

# debian-jp の活動にはあまり参加できていない私にとって、この
# weekly news は読むこと自体が楽しみです :-)

-- 
中野@成蹊大

--- wn091999.html.orig	Tue Sep 21 02:34:32 1999
+++ wn091999.html	Tue Sep 21 03:00:35 1999
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@
  <li> [jp-policy: 00058] [pod 00575] Call for participation
 <ul>
 
- <li> Fumitoshi UKAI, the Debian JP project leader, express the will to
-      participate in the Linux L18N project group.  For detail
-      information, please refer to the below URL.<br>
+ <li> Fumitoshi UKAI, the Debian JP project leader, expressed the will to
+      participate in the Linux L18N project group.  For detail,
+      please refer to the URL below.<br>
       <a href="http://www.li18nux.org/";>http://www.li18nux.org/</a><br>
 
 <a href="http://www.debian.or.jp/Lists-Archives/jp-policy/199909/msg00005.html";>
@@ -40,19 +40,22 @@
       Schulze in debian-devel@debian.org.
       &lt;19990913032212.E21536@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx&gt;.
       And Akira YOSHIYAMA, the author of the boot-floppies-ja,
-      indicated crux short points on the current boot-floppy system.
-      He said the current one highly depends on the Debian version and
+      poited out fatal deficiencies in the current boot-floppy system.
+      He said the current one was highly dependent on the Debian version and
       there's no flexibility against the change of the package
-      configuration.  The below is a part of list.
+      configuration.  The below is a part of the list.
 <ul>
 
- <li> boot-floppies do the configuration setup after the installation.
-      It should be done by the side of package management.
+       <!--NAKANO "boot-floppies" is a singular or pl? -->
+
+ <li> boot-floppies does the configuration setup after the installation.
+      It should be done in the framework of each package.
 
  <li> boot-floppies checks the package-selection's dependency.
+      <!--NAKANO sorry, I can't see why this is a flaw...-->
 
- <li> To require base system makes the size of Debian archive large and
-      also makes boot-floppy the Debian version specific one.
+ <li> As it requires the base system, it strongly depends on the Debian version.
+      Also, the size of Debian archive becomes large.
 </ul>
 
 <p>
@@ -65,8 +68,8 @@
  <li>  [jp-policy: 00061] Re: yup, we are dead ... NOT
 <ul>
 
- <li> Also Taketoshi Sano's work for information about
-     debian-devel@debian.org.  He translates the 
+ <li> Taketoshi Sano also worked for another information about
+     debian-devel@debian.org.  He translated the 
      &lt;19990913153021.D352@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx&gt; .<p>
 
 <a href="http://www.debian.or.jp/Lists-Archives/jp-policy/199909/msg00008.html";>
@@ -79,7 +82,7 @@
 <ul>
 
  <li> Yet another Taketoshi Sano's work for information about
-     debian-devel@debian.org.  He translates the content of the
+     debian-devel@debian.org.  He translated the content of the
      following URL.<br>
 <a href="http://tux.u-strasbg.fr/~raphael/qa/doc/qa.html/";>http://tux.u-strasbg.fr/~raphael/qa/doc/qa.html/</a>
 
@@ -95,10 +98,10 @@
 
 <ul>
 
- <li> Kiwamu Okabe posted the location of beta of the virtual apt
+ <li> Kiwamu Okabe posted the beta release of the virtual apt
       server.  It communicates with the Debian installation method like
-      apt and if the server receives the request from client, returns
-      the requested packages by dpkg-repacking from server's archive.
+      apt.  When it receives the package request from client, it creates the
+      archive using dpkg-repacking and provides it, if the host has the package installed.
       It would be useful in the case that you want to install Debian to
       your friends machine.  Please visit the below<br>
 
@@ -110,7 +113,7 @@
 
 <li> [debian-users:17874] Visualized Release-critical Bugreport for Sep. 17, 1999
 <ul>
- <li> Ken Nakagaki posted the Visualized Release-critical Bugreport for
+ <li> Ken Nakagaki posted the visualization of Release-critical Bugreport for
       Sep. 17, 1999.  It plots the transition of the number of the BUGs
       as well as the accumulated number of BUGs.  Gzipped PS result is
       attached.
@@ -143,8 +146,8 @@
  <li>  [debian-devel:10400] Namazu with gettext
 <ul>
 
- <li> Namazu( in English, catfish) is a search engine software intended
- for easy use.  The upstream author of Namazu are thinking about the
+ <li> Namazu (&quot;catfish&quot; in Japanese) is a search engine software intended
+ for easy use.  The upstream author of Namazu is thinking about the
  gettext extension.  For further information about Namazu, please visit
  the below.<br>
 
@@ -164,7 +167,7 @@
 
  <li> [debian-devel:10384] Intent to package: gtkdiff
     Masayuki Hatta ITPed diff front-end using GTK+/GNOME.  It can treat
-    Japanese correct and have good looking interface.<p>
+    Japanese correctly and has good looking interface.<p>
 
 <a href="http://www.debian.or.jp/Lists-Archives/debian-devel/199909/msg00181.html";>http://www.debian.or.jp/Lists-Archives/debian-devel/199909/msg00181.html</a>