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[debian-devel:14661] Re: Indent to package hpsc (Hyper Scheduler)

私 native じゃないし，というか英語は不得意なんです．さらにはぱっと見た
だけなので，御参考程度まで．

Description: Web based scheduler.

とかにした方がよいんじゃないですか？言いたいことは伝わらないでもな
いですが．

From: Yukiharu Yabuki <yabuki@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: [debian-devel:14660] Re: Indent to package hpsc (Hyper Scheduler)
Date: Tue, 6 Nov 2001 21:11:05 +0900
Message-ID: <20011106120816.840699B816@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>

yabuki>  Description: Hyper Schduler (CGI)
			    Scheduler
yabuki>   You can see your schedule via web browser.
yabuki>   You can see more detail if you click some schedule items.
more 不要， the detail か  details か． You can see で始まる文が2つ
続くのも不格好なので，
  Hyper Scheduler is an application to organized schedule on a web
  browser.  You can see, write, and remove your plan item everywhere if
  use web browser.  
とか．
yabuki>   This software is a kind of groupware.
                                    ^ the 無いとすごく不自然に感じます．
				      (いわゆる groupware の一種ですっ
				      		    て言いたいんですよね？)
yabuki>   The goal of this software is to be an useful electric schedule board.
                                        to be 不要じゃないですかね．