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アーカイブの内容は以下になります。
$ tar ztf d-i-update0529.tar.gz
ja/preparing/nondeb-part/i386.xml
ja/preparing/bios-setup/sparc.xml
ja/preparing/bios-setup/i386.xml
ja/preparing/bios-setup/s390.xml
ja/preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml
ja/boot-installer/i386.xml
ja/boot-installer/parameters.xml
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倉澤 望(鍋太郎)
KURASAWA Nozomu (nabetaro) <nabetaro @ caldron.jp>
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Index: ja/preparing/nondeb-part/i386.xml =================================================================== --- ja/preparing/nondeb-part/i386.xml (ӥ 37627) +++ ja/preparing/nondeb-part/i386.xml (ȥԡ) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="EUC-JP"?> <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking --> -<!-- original version: 29561 --> +<!-- original version: 36732 --> <sect2 arch="i386"><title>DOS Windows Υѡƥʬ</title> @@ -208,8 +208,9 @@ <!-- Apparently, whenever you create or resize a partition for DOS use, -it's a good idea to fill the first few sectors with zeros. Do this -prior to running DOS's <command>format</command> command, from Linux: +it's a good idea to fill the first few sectors with zeros. You should do +this prior to running DOS's <command>format</command> command by executing +the following command from Linux: --> ɤ顢 DOS ǻѤѡƥꤽ̤ѹꤹϡ Index: ja/preparing/bios-setup/sparc.xml =================================================================== --- ja/preparing/bios-setup/sparc.xml (ӥ 37627) +++ ja/preparing/bios-setup/sparc.xml (ȥԡ) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="EUC-JP"?> <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking --> -<!-- original version: 28997 --> +<!-- original version: 36732 --> <sect2 arch="sparc" id="invoking-openboot"><title>OpenBoot εư</title> @@ -13,13 +13,14 @@ x86 architecture, although much nicer. The Sun boot PROMs have a built-in forth interpreter which lets you do quite a number of things with your machine, such as diagnostics, simple scripts, etc. +with your machine, such as diagnostics and simple scripts. --> OpenBoot ϡ&arch-title; ƥΥ֡ȤɬפȤʤ ŪʵǽΤǤ x86 ƥ֤ BIOS ȵǽŪˤϻƤޤ äͥƤޤ Sun Υ֡ PROM ˤ Forth ΥץȤ߹ޤƤꡢ -ȤȿǤԤäꡢñʥץȤ¹Ԥꡢ +ȤȿǤñʥץȤμ¹Ԥʤɡ ԥ塼ФƤޤޤʤȤԤޤ </para><para> @@ -71,7 +72,7 @@ <!-- You can use OpenBoot to boot from specific devices, and also to change your default boot device. However, you need to know some details -about how OpenBoot names devices; it's much different from Linux +about how OpenBoot names devices; it's considerably different from Linux device naming, described in <xref linkend="device-names"/>. Also, the command will vary a bit, depending on what version of OpenBoot you have. More information about OpenBoot can be found in @@ -90,7 +91,7 @@ </para><para> <!-- -Typically, with newer revisions, you can use OpenBoot device such as +Typically, with newer revisions, you can use OpenBoot devices such as <quote>floppy</quote>, <quote>cdrom</quote>, <quote>net</quote>, <quote>disk</quote>, or <quote>disk2</quote>. These have the obvious meanings; the <quote>net</quote> device is for booting from the network. Index: ja/preparing/bios-setup/i386.xml =================================================================== --- ja/preparing/bios-setup/i386.xml (ӥ 37627) +++ ja/preparing/bios-setup/i386.xml (ȥԡ) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="EUC-JP"?> <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking --> -<!-- original version: 28997 --> +<!-- original version: 36732 --> <sect2 arch="i386" id="bios-setup"><title>BIOS ˥塼εư</title> @@ -208,13 +208,13 @@ </para><para> <!-- -Other popular option is to boot from a USB storage (also called USB -memory stick or USB key). Some BIOSes can boot USB storage directly, -and some cannot. You may need to configure your BIOS to boot from -a <quote>Removable drive</quote> or even a <quote>USB-ZIP</quote> to +Another popular option is to boot from a USB storage device (also called +a USB memory stick or USB key). Some BIOSes can boot directly from a USB +storage device, but some cannot. You may need to configure your BIOS to boot +from a <quote>Removable drive</quote> or even from <quote>USB-ZIP</quote> to get it to boot from the USB device. --> -¾ŪʥץϡUSB ȥ졼 +¾ΰŪʥץϡUSB ȥ졼 (USB ƥå USB ȤƤФޤ) 鵯ư뤳ȤǤ Ĥ BIOS USB ȥ졼Υǥ쥯ȥ꤫ľܵưǤޤ ǤʤΤ⤢ޤUSB ǥХ鵯ư뤿ˡ Index: ja/preparing/bios-setup/s390.xml =================================================================== --- ja/preparing/bios-setup/s390.xml (ӥ 37627) +++ ja/preparing/bios-setup/s390.xml (ȥԡ) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="EUC-JP"?> <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking --> -<!-- original version: 28672 --> +<!-- original version: 36732 --> <sect2 arch="s390"><title>BIOS </title> @@ -160,13 +160,13 @@ <!-- The installation server needs to copy the exact directory structure -from any &debian; mirror but of only the s390 and +from any &debian; mirror, but only the s390 and architecture-independent files are required. You can also copy the contents of all installation CDs into such a directory tree. --> ȡ륵Фˤϡ&debian; ߥ顼Τ줫顢 ǥ쥯ȥ깽¤ΤޤޥԡƤʤФʤޤ -ɬפʤΤ s390 ȥƥˤʤեǤ +ɬפʤΤ s390 ȥƥ˰¸ʤեǤ 뤤ϡȡ CD Ƥ Υǥ쥯ȥĥ˥ԡΤǤޤ Index: ja/preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml =================================================================== --- ja/preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml (ӥ 37627) +++ ja/preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml (ȥԡ) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="EUC-JP"?> <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking --> -<!-- original version: 28672 --> +<!-- original version: 36732 --> <sect2 arch="powerpc" id="invoking-openfirmware"> @@ -77,7 +77,8 @@ utility, available from Apple at <ulink url="ftp://ftp.apple.com/developer/macosxserver/utilities/SystemDisk2.3.1.smi.bin";></ulink>. After unpacking the utility in MacOS, and launching it, select the -Save button to have the firmware patches installed to nvram. +<guibutton>Save button</guibutton> to have the firmware patches +installed to nvram. --> OldWorld Beige G3 ޥǤϡOpenFirmware 2.0f1 2.4 Ȥʪˤʤޤե०˥ѥåƤʤȡ @@ -85,7 +86,8 @@ ե०Υѥå <application>System Disk 2.3.1</application> 桼ƥƥ˴ޤޤƤꡢApple <ulink url="ftp://ftp.apple.com/developer/macosxserver/utilities/SystemDisk2.3.1.smi.bin";></ulink> Ǥޤ -Υ桼ƥƥ MacOS Ÿ¹Ԥ Save ܥȡ +Υ桼ƥƥ MacOS Ÿ +¹Ԥ <guibutton>Save ܥ</guibutton>ȡ ե०Υѥå nvram ˥ȡ뤵ޤ </para> Index: ja/boot-installer/i386.xml =================================================================== --- ja/boot-installer/i386.xml (ӥ 37627) +++ ja/boot-installer/i386.xml (ȥԡ) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="EUC-JP"?> <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking --> -<!-- original version: 33886 --> +<!-- original version: 36744 --> <sect2 arch="i386"><title>CD-ROM εư</title> @@ -293,25 +293,8 @@ Ǥ USB ͥ USB ƥåǡ ԥ塼ƵưƤ ƥबư <prompt>boot:</prompt> ץץȤɽϤǤ -ǡץΥ֡ȰϤ뤫 &enterkey; Ǥޤ +ǡץΥ֡ȰϤ뤫ñ &enterkey; Ƥ -</para><para condition="supports-floppy-boot"> - -<!-- -In case your computer doesn't support booting from USB memory devices, -you can still use a single floppy to do the initial boot and then -switch to USB. Boot your system as described in <xref linkend="floppy-boot"/>; -the kernel on the boot floppy should detect your USB stick automatically. -When it asks for the root floppy, simply press &enterkey;. You should see -&d-i; starting. ---> -ԥ塼 USB ǥХεưݡȤƤʤ硢 -ǽεưˤϥեåԡѤθ USB ڤؤ뤳ȤǤޤ -<xref linkend="floppy-boot"/> Τ褦˥ƥưƤ -֡ȥեåԡΥͥϡUSB ƥåưФǤ礦 -root եåԡˤĤƿ֤줿顢ñ &enterkey; Ƥ -&d-i; Ϥޤ - </para> </sect2> Index: ja/boot-installer/parameters.xml =================================================================== --- ja/boot-installer/parameters.xml (ӥ 37627) +++ ja/boot-installer/parameters.xml (ȥԡ) @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="EUC-JP"?> <!-- retain these comments for translator revision tracking --> -<!-- original version: 33725 --> +<!-- original version: 36744 --> <sect1 id="boot-parms"><title>֡ȥѥ</title> <para> @@ -327,12 +327,12 @@ </para><para> <!-- -The boot floppy, which normally scans all floppies and USB storage -devices it can to find the root floppy, can be overridden by this -parameter to only look at the one device. +The boot floppy, which normally scans all floppies it can to find the +root floppy, can be overridden by this parameter to only look at the +one device. --> ֡ȥեåԡ root եåԡõΤˡ -̾եåԡ USB ȥ졼ޤ +̾եåԡޤ Υѥ 1 ĤΥǥХõ褦˾Ǥޤ </para></listitem>